Weekend Writing Warriors 8 Sentence Sunday!!
I wanted to share a small burb from my most recent published book, The Key to Helmbrooke. If you haven't read it yet, this scene is where Isabelle is traipsing through the darkened woods, determined to make her way to the queen's castle. Without anyone to guide her or protect her, one wrong step brings her right into the arms of a dangerous stranger:
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“Please,” a woman’s voice whispered.
“Please,” a woman’s voice whispered.
Zander let her go and whirled her around to face him, one hand tight on her arm. His eyes widened with surprise, for just a moment. He had not expected a young girl. For a split second, he was mesmerized by her eyes, striking at the chords of his heart. They were filled with fear, wide with surprise. He gave his head a quick shake breaking the stare.
“What are you doing here?” Zander growled at her.
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If you would like to read the entire book, simply head over to Amazon and grab it HERE.
If you'd like a FREE copy, in exchange for an HONEST review, I would greatly appreciate it. Send me an email at JaynWilde AT gmail. com and I can send it over to you.
If you want to check out more fantastic weekend writing warriors, then go to www.wewriwa.com :)
I have a feeling Zander isn't going to be able to shake off the effect she's having on him. Intriguing excerpt!
ReplyDeleteI have a feeling you may be right. ;)
DeleteThis sounds like it could be leading up to something. Interesting!
ReplyDeleteAhhhh...it does Debbie ;) Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteLove this Jayn! It pulled me right in!
ReplyDeleteThank you Lauren. I am happy you liked it and thank you for stopping by! :)
DeleteThis sounds interesting. It seems as if Zander is going to find himself even more impressed by the young woman he discovered.
ReplyDeleteThank you Elaine! Yes, they are in for some interesting times. ;) Thanks for stopping by!
DeleteLovely. I liked the urgency you conveyed. Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!!! :)
DeleteWell, this certainly sets up some interesting things to come! Looking forward to reading more.
ReplyDelete~Joyce Scarbrough
Thank you so much Joyce.
DeleteHmm...they have met before...
ReplyDeleteGood job conveying atmosphere and tension. :-)
Thank you very much Teresa! :)
DeleteI liked it, I've always been a fan of those intense stare downs. :) Great 8!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Marie. Your comment means a lot to me. ;)
DeleteOoo, what IS she doing there? Love the name Zander and definitely felt the tension in the scene! Great 8 :D
ReplyDeleteHee hee... cannot spoil it. This is just the beginning of their journey. ;) Thank you so very much for your wonderful comment Karen and for stopping by. :)
DeleteNice excerpt. It drew me right in.
ReplyDeleteI can feel lots of emotions swirling around in your words. Exciting snippet.
ReplyDeleteThat could hae been a bad moment for her but I get the feeling she's going to grow on Zander. :)
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